I know it may sometimes be challenging to read a 170 comic story at one page a week, but here’s a creator’s benefit I love– I occasionally go back and read the story to insure it’s holding together or see if there’s improvements I can make. I have altered art or dialog a few times, but no one probably ever knows.

So, just for kicks, I’m telling you about one I just did! The top image has the old dialog from page 117. The bottom image is the change I made. It hit me as a little more fun, which is hopefully the bottomline for this strip!

Toothpick

 

 

 

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